I first came across this book yesterday when I saw the announcement for the cover reveal of Book 2 on Twitter (that linked to a blog). I’m not going to include the picture of Book 2’s cover in this post because there was an official release for it, but you should definitely click the link and have a look. It’s really something special!
So, since I am one of those people who gets excited by awesome book covers, I naturally looked into the series and I was not disappointed! It sounds quite interesting! And if that is not enough, Book 1 is free on Amazon!
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I started editing the other day and when I got to the end of chapter 2 I realised I had not even added in the things I wanted to add. I had only really worked on sentence structure and the flow of the story…
So, today I went back over my prologue and chapter 1 and spent a lot more time on them. I think, maybe, I am finally happy with those…? (probably until I read them again and decide they are still not ready…)
I am still finding editing a lot more time consuming and difficult than the first draft, but I am hoping I will get the hang of it soon…
Book One of The Elemental Diaries
Andrea B. Lamoureux
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
Experience the growth of Zephyra as she struggles with living as a royal. Being the cousin to Adelaide, the heir to the throne, she feels as though she is unimportant and that everyone is out to get her. The difficult relationship she has with her mother distances her from the rest of the court, and there are very few people she can trust.
Life changes drastically once Adelaide becomes Queen, and Zephyra must make a difficult choice in order to keep her cousin safe. This leads her into dangerous situations, as she comes to realise that life outside of the palace is not as pleasant as it had seemed.
The plot thickens as Zephyra learns new information, and she must find other ways to help Queen Adelaide, while also discovering the burning power within.
This book contains well developed characters that are consistent and relatable. Their growth relies heavily on their backgrounds and past experiences and we are given a lot of information.
Zephyra starts as a girl who just wants to feel included, but she learns that life is not fair and she closes herself off from the rest of the world. She has good intentions, but she has been hurt too many times, and her pain is clearly expressed. Zephyra is a realistic and interesting character. The relationship she has with her mother is intriguing and her actions were understandable, considering her past experiences.
Adelaide comes across as the pretty girl who has everything going for her, at least on the outside. Deep down, she struggles with maintaining a strong appearance and everything is not as easy as it seems. She is a kind character and I liked reading about her.
The book starts slowly, explaining the early life of Zephyra in detail. I was a bit lost at first, unsure where the story was leading, but I soon became absorbed in what was happening and the slow pace was actually enjoyable.
The pace quickens suddenly, but it was easy to keep up. I found the dangers a little repetitive, as Zephyra seemed to keep running into the same type of people, but it also remained consistent with the world and so it did not bother me much. I also thought the control of power came on too easily and it should have been explained more.
This book appears to be suitable for Young Adults for the first several chapters, but the later plot is clearly written for mature audiences. I did not have any issues with what happened but some people might disagree and have trouble reading about some of the experiences.
I loved the world. There was a good amount of detail in the world building. Different regions had their own colours, symbols and even different hair. Looking back on it now, I wish I knew more about it, but enough information was provided while reading and I am sure we will be given more details in the future books.
This book is well written and I noticed very few errors. There is a consistent use of language that suits the world, and I found this really enjoyable.
I also found the small paragraph written just before chapter one to be very interesting and it was a good inclusion.
I really enjoyed becoming lost in Zephyra’s world and I felt involved in her life as she grew. I will definitely be reading the next book in the series when it is released. I look forward to it!
I finally started editing my WiP, after finishing my first draft last week. I had spent so much time on writing during November that I really wanted to catch up with some other things first. Though, now I realise that this was also just an excuse. I find that I have very little motivation for editing. I really enjoyed doing the first draft and letting the story flow, but I know what happens now.. now I need to go and make everything.. better…
I feel like there is a lot more pressure for the second draft. The first one was easy for me (once I finally got started, for the second time…). I followed the characters and enjoyed their surprises. Whenever I came across something that did not seem to be quite right, I knew I could just get my idea out there and fix it up later.
I have just gone through my prologue and chapters 1 and 2. I added another 100 words while changing sentences and explaining things a little more. Once I reached the end of chapter 2 I realised I had hardly touched my to do list. There were things I wanted to add that I still have not added… so I guess I will be going back over it again…
Does anyone else find that the second draft has more pressure? What do you do to increase your motivation?
I thought October was a good month, so I guess that makes November just awesome! I must say, I am pretty pleased with my progress this month! I did decide to put my poetry on hold for the time being so I had more time to focus on other things, but I am enjoying the discussions with Wondering Writers!
After giving it a lot of thought, I decided not to sign up for NaNo because I thought the pressure of writing would reduce my enjoyment, especially since I do not have a lot of time to write. However, at the start of the month I decided that I would keep track of my progress anyway, just to see how I would have done. It was a good motivator (as well as the writing challenges with Ian!)
During November I wrote 53.6k words! Considering I only added 15.5k words to my novel last month, I am over the moon by this progress. But, that’s not all! If you have been keeping up to date with my blog then you would have seen that I also finished my first draft! It’s only been a few days since then, and I can still hardly believe it…
The Power of Whispers currently sits at just under 90k words, and I have a very long to do list to keep me occupied with my second draft…
Reading has been a lot slower this month since I have spent more time writing and I have also been doing more things with my daughter (playgym, etc). She had her first cold too. I only managed to read and review two books this month.
I am currently doing a beta read for a fantasy novel and I started to read Zephyra by Andrea B. Lamoureux, which I will be getting back to after I finish the beta read.
Overall, I am definitely happy with the month. Reading reduced quite a lot, but I progressed so far with my writing. More importantly, I enjoyed every moment of it, even when I felt like I hit a roadblock. It did not take long to overcome and I felt as though the story just flowed out.
So, here I was, cruising along with my writing, enjoying my pace and coming to the realisation that I was getting close to the end.. and then wham! Today I managed to put in a lot of effort and there we go! I FINISHED MY FIRST DRAFT!
I’m kind of sitting here at the moment in a state of confusion, wondering what just happened. I mean, I had a feeling I was going to finish it soon, maybe by tomorrow or in a few days. I knew it was coming.. but that does not prepare you for when the time actually comes.
I’m not really sure how I feel at the moment.. How is one meant to feel after this? I’m a little overwhelmed! It’s been a long time coming.. and I know I still have a long way to go, but wow… I finished the first draft of a novel!
The Power of Whispers currently sits at just shy of 90k words!
My previous update mentioned that I was getting close to finishing my first draft. I’ve managed to overcome the roadblock I hit for a bit, but my progress has still slowed since I need to put some more thought into the ending. Slowed, but not stopped! Definitely still getting there!
I’ve also started thinking about some other things. Some of you will be looking out for my poetry Monday post, but I’ve decided to put that on hold for now. The holiday season is getting busy and I’m just so focused on my WiP that I don’t have a lot of motivation for poetry. My last couple of poems have been last minute writes.. I will get back to it though, promise!
I have also made a rough decision about my next novel! The Power of Whispers is technically a stand alone book but I plan for all my books to be in the same world. They might take place at different times, or be set in different kingdoms, etc. My current plan is that all my books will only have one character point of view (as in, a different one per book, but only one for each book). So! I think my next novel will follow one of the characters introduced in The Power of Whispers. There will be very little overlap, mainly focusing on what happens to that character after they go in their own direction.
I’m feeling so motivated to do lots of things at the moment! If people like my work I’ll probably also put up polls about favourite characters and write short stories for the characters people like the most. I have some other plans as well, but I can only do so much at once… need to finish my current book first!